Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable
Corrected
1. The Titanic, believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves.
Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land
Corrected
2. Because the student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem The Waste Land.
DOL 26
Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly
Corrected
1. Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the Atlantic Monthly, a renowned magazine.
Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library
Corrected
2. "I am very eager to read the French novel The Plague, "Carmen said, "but it is not in our library."
DOL 27
Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations
Corrected
-Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations.
Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner
Corrected
- Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.
DOL 28
Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet
Corrected
1. I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope, the largest I had ever seen to observe halleys.
Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing
Corrected
2. Ms. Massayo asked, "Do you feel alright now Walter or don't you want to go skiing?"
DOL 33
Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library
Corrected
1. When are these books due, Hans? Should I bring them to the library?
Sentence
2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified
Corrected
2. After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.
DOL 34
Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain
Corrected
1. Much depends on whether you're affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain.
Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier
Corrected
2. While half of the class uses the Internet, the rest will study the Smithsonia Magazines that are different from the ones we used earlier.
DOL 35
Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft
Corrected
1. Oh, we haven't finished our group book report because no one had a copy of Marie's draft.
Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming
Corrected
2. My mom likes canceling on the Yellowstone River, hiking in Montant, and camping in Wyoming.
DOL 36
Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated
Corrected
1. There are some athletes who rarely play, but continue to practice Mrs. Ahmed the new principal stated.
Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think
Corrected
2. The world series, although often exciting, sometimes, is too slow placed for my mom and I.
DOL 37
Sentence 1: (this is the heading to a letter - I will explain)
ms paula jeffers
campton paper company
18376 river drive
minneaplois mn
dear ms jeffers
Corrected
Ms. Paula Jeffers
Campton Paper Company
18376 River Drive
Minneaplois mn
Dear Ms. Jeffers,
DOL 38
Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged too enjoy
Corrected
1. The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights that we are all privileged to enjoy.
Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew
Corrected
2. We have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because so many actors caught the flu.
DOL 39
Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner
Corrected
1. In order to go to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help my mom fix dinner.
Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29
Corrected
2. Mr. Corazzini, who cannot start his car, was taken by bus to Dulles airport on tuesday, October 29.
DOL 40
Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico
Corrected
1. Luisa bought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin from Atlanta.
Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry
Corrected
2. Oscar, please set these books on the library table; if you don't have a lot of things to carry.
DOL 41
Sentence 1: park rangers who words in large forests periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth
Corrected
1. Park rangers, who wards in large forests, periodically set fires to marked lands to encourage new growth.
Sentence 2: after the discovery of penicillin very many miracle drugs appeared ironically though 40 years later bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs
Corrected
2. After the discovery of penicillin, many miracle drugs appeared ironically through 40 years later, bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drug.
DOL 42
Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination
Corrected
1. Differences among the eight camp counselors caused a change in the field trip's destination.
Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests
Corrected
2. First, Felicia planned the party; second, decided on decorations; third, she invited special guests.
DOL 43
Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club
Corrected
1. Do Juan and David's ownership of this sailboat entitle them to membership in the Winthrop Beach Yacht Club?
Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found
Corrected
2. The article "In Search of Spanish Galleons" in the book Shipwrecks was written b Kiber and Rotondi who believed it will be found.
DOL 44
Sentence 1: neither rasheed or larry dont want their teams loss to suggest that team members didnt play good
Corrected
1. I neither Rashed nor Larry want their team's loss to suggest that team members didn't play well.
Sentence 2: mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school but only individual students as a result of that rule the student handbook was checked
Corrected
2. Mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school but individual students, the student handbook was changed.
DOL 45
Sentence 1: it says here on the bottle label that the baddest reaction to this here medicine would be drowsiness so your alright.
Corrected
1. It says on the bottle label that the worst reaction to this medicine would be drowsiness, so you are alright.
Sentence 2: at the beginning of class Ms. Kenney took attendance assigns new work and homework was checked
Corrected
2. At the beginning of class, Ms. Kenny took attendance, assigned new work, and checked homework.
Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable
Corrected
1. The Titanic, believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves.
Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land
Corrected
2. Because the student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem The Waste Land.
DOL 26
Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly
Corrected
1. Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the Atlantic Monthly, a renowned magazine.
Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library
Corrected
2. "I am very eager to read the French novel The Plague, "Carmen said, "but it is not in our library."
DOL 27
Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations
Corrected
-Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations.
Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner
Corrected
- Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.
DOL 28
Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet
Corrected
1. I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope, the largest I had ever seen to observe halleys.
Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing
Corrected
2. Ms. Massayo asked, "Do you feel alright now Walter or don't you want to go skiing?"
DOL 33
Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library
Corrected
1. When are these books due, Hans? Should I bring them to the library?
Sentence
2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified
Corrected
2. After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.
DOL 34
Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain
Corrected
1. Much depends on whether you're affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain.
Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier
Corrected
2. While half of the class uses the Internet, the rest will study the Smithsonia Magazines that are different from the ones we used earlier.
DOL 35
Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft
Corrected
1. Oh, we haven't finished our group book report because no one had a copy of Marie's draft.
Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming
Corrected
2. My mom likes canceling on the Yellowstone River, hiking in Montant, and camping in Wyoming.
DOL 36
Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated
Corrected
1. There are some athletes who rarely play, but continue to practice Mrs. Ahmed the new principal stated.
Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think
Corrected
2. The world series, although often exciting, sometimes, is too slow placed for my mom and I.
DOL 37
Sentence 1: (this is the heading to a letter - I will explain)
ms paula jeffers
campton paper company
18376 river drive
minneaplois mn
dear ms jeffers
Corrected
Ms. Paula Jeffers
Campton Paper Company
18376 River Drive
Minneaplois mn
Dear Ms. Jeffers,
DOL 38
Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged too enjoy
Corrected
1. The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights that we are all privileged to enjoy.
Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew
Corrected
2. We have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because so many actors caught the flu.
DOL 39
Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner
Corrected
1. In order to go to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help my mom fix dinner.
Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29
Corrected
2. Mr. Corazzini, who cannot start his car, was taken by bus to Dulles airport on tuesday, October 29.
DOL 40
Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico
Corrected
1. Luisa bought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin from Atlanta.
Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry
Corrected
2. Oscar, please set these books on the library table; if you don't have a lot of things to carry.
DOL 41
Sentence 1: park rangers who words in large forests periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth
Corrected
1. Park rangers, who wards in large forests, periodically set fires to marked lands to encourage new growth.
Sentence 2: after the discovery of penicillin very many miracle drugs appeared ironically though 40 years later bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs
Corrected
2. After the discovery of penicillin, many miracle drugs appeared ironically through 40 years later, bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drug.
DOL 42
Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination
Corrected
1. Differences among the eight camp counselors caused a change in the field trip's destination.
Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests
Corrected
2. First, Felicia planned the party; second, decided on decorations; third, she invited special guests.
DOL 43
Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club
Corrected
1. Do Juan and David's ownership of this sailboat entitle them to membership in the Winthrop Beach Yacht Club?
Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found
Corrected
2. The article "In Search of Spanish Galleons" in the book Shipwrecks was written b Kiber and Rotondi who believed it will be found.
DOL 44
Sentence 1: neither rasheed or larry dont want their teams loss to suggest that team members didnt play good
Corrected
1. I neither Rashed nor Larry want their team's loss to suggest that team members didn't play well.
Sentence 2: mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school but only individual students as a result of that rule the student handbook was checked
Corrected
2. Mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school but individual students, the student handbook was changed.
DOL 45
Sentence 1: it says here on the bottle label that the baddest reaction to this here medicine would be drowsiness so your alright.
Corrected
1. It says on the bottle label that the worst reaction to this medicine would be drowsiness, so you are alright.
Sentence 2: at the beginning of class Ms. Kenney took attendance assigns new work and homework was checked
Corrected
2. At the beginning of class, Ms. Kenny took attendance, assigned new work, and checked homework.